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		<description><![CDATA[Remembering Craig Arnold.
By Christian Wiman
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It is now seven months since Craig Arnold died—or vanished, as most notices have termed it. We have delayed running an obituary for him partly because of the circumstances of his death. As most people in the poetry world now know, he disappeared while exploring a volcano on a [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=ericedits.wordpress.com&blog=1839372&post=549&subd=ericedits&ref=&feed=1" />]]></description>
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<p>By Christian Wiman<br />
Poetry Media Service</p>
<p>It is now seven months since <a href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend.com/t/r/l/hhutz/xztjldt/r" target="_blank">Craig Arnold</a> died—or vanished, as most notices have termed it. We have delayed running an obituary for him partly because of the circumstances of his death. As most people in the poetry world now know, he disappeared while exploring a volcano on a Japanese island, and all indications are that he suffered a fatal fall in such a remote and dense location that his body may never be found. Another part of the delay, though, perhaps the better part of it, is this: I knew Craig, and knew him to be a person in whom life burned so intensely and immediately that not only is his death at 41 a shock, but in some part of my brain it simply will not register.</p>
<p>I first met Craig about 10 years ago at a little college in Virginia, where he was part of a symposium of young poets I had organized. Tall, lean, and with his head shaved, clad in black leather pants and tight white T-shirt, he didn’t “read” his poems: he performed them, strutting elastically about as if he were on stage, whipsawing lines and limbs in precise, rehearsed ways, electrifying that quaint little lecture hall as if it were the Moulin Rouge. I tend to be allergic to this kind of self-dramatization in poetry, but I loved it. All of it: the flair that seemed to arise naturally out of his character rather than being appliquéd on; the mercurial and protean nature of his subjects (and, I would learn, his own life); the hell-bent hungers and raptures kept in check—or at least kept intact, intelligible—by the tough-minded conscience and craft that ran through the poems like a spine.</p>
<p>Those were the poems of <em>Shells</em>, Craig’s first book, which had been selected by <a href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend.com/t/r/l/hhutz/xztjldt/y" target="_blank">W.S. Merwin</a> for the Yale Series of Younger Poets in 1998 (published in 1999). The poems hold up, to say the least. In fact, what strikes me when reading them now is how little they need any embellishment of drama or gesture, how absolute their integrity is on the page. “Hot,” a long, tightly wrought narrative that is emblematic of the book as a whole, is about—besides life and death and art, I mean—two friends who share a passion, of a sort, for ever-hotter peppers:</p>
<blockquote><p><em> I called in sick</em><em><br />
</em><em> next morning, said I’d like to take</em><em></p>
<p></em><em> time off. She thinks I’ve hit the bottle.</em><em><br />
</em><em>The high those peppers gave me is more subtle—</em><em></p>
<p></em><em> I’m lucid, I remember my full name,</em><em><br />
</em><em>my parents’ birthdays, how to win a game</em><em></p>
<p></em><em> of chess in seven moves, why which and that</em><em><br />
</em><em> mean different things. But what we eat, </em><em></p>
<p></em><em>why, what it means, it’s all been explained</em><em><br />
</em><em> —Take this curry, this fine-tuned</em><em></p>
<p></em><em>balance of humors, coconut liquor thinned</em><em><br />
</em><em> by broth, sour pulp of tamarind</em><em></p>
<p></em><em> cut through by salt, set off by fragrant</em><em><br />
</em><em>galangal, ginger, basil, cilantro, mint,</em><em></p>
<p></em><em>the warp and woof of texture, aubergines</em><em><br />
</em><em> that barely hold their shape, snap beans</em><em></p>
<p></em><em> heaped on jasmine, basmati rice</em><em><br />
</em><em>—it’s a lie, all of it—pretext—artifice</em><em></p>
<p></em><em> —ornament—sugar-coating—for . . .</em><em> </em></p></blockquote>
<p>For what? Well, that’s the whole heart of “Hot,” the whole heart of Craig, really, who seems to me as powerfully present in these poems as when I first heard him perform them all those years ago—and as teasingly elusive.</p>
<p>Nine years would pass between the publication of <em>Shells</em> and the appearance of Craig’s next book, <em>Made Flesh,</em> nine years in which Craig lived in Rome and Bogotá and Wyoming and Utah and I don’t know where else. It was in some ways the typical 21st-century up-and-coming American poet’s life—the pickup jobs and the scramble for publishers, the fellowships and relationships (for the past six years of his life, Craig was very happily partnered with another poet, Rebecca Lindenberg), the constant effort to find a way of staying alive without allowing one’s lifeblood to congeal into a career.</p>
<p>And yet it wasn’t so typical, too: Craig was perhaps the only poet I have known personally—the only good poet, I should say—who seemed completely at ease with being a poet. Don’t get me wrong: Craig had all of the existential friction and psychic disquiet we’ve come to expect from post-Romantic poets—an excess of it, actually. You don’t have to read his poems autobiographically—and they’re too cunningly, winningly imagined to do that—to get a hint of the tempest that was their source. But he also had, right down to his soul (I guess it <em> was</em> his soul), a calm and clarifying equanimity about his purpose on this earth, and always over the years when I would encounter him—a few days in Virginia again, a dinner in San Francisco, a breakfast in Chicago—I would discover my own bristling insecurities melting away in his presence, and would feel my own relationship with poetry renewed. This wasn’t because Craig had achieved some sort of monkish calm with regard to ambition (ha!), and it certainly wasn’t because he was placidly and brainlessly open to everything he encountered (in fact, he could be quite sudden and sharp in his opinions). No, what Craig had, besides his endless and endlessly inclusive charisma, was a capacity to be at once absolutely grounded in the physical world, and in his own body, and yet utterly, mysteriously permeable. I’m not sure how this played out in his daily life, but I know it affected mine, and for the better. I also know that this quality gives the concrete things of his poetry, and especially his later poetry, a powerful sense of being more themselves by being more <em>than</em> themselves:</p>
<blockquote><p>Here is a small café<br />
opening for breakfast<br />
a zinc counter catching the light<br />
at every angle in bright rings of glitter<br />
A cup of black coffee is placed before you<br />
brimming with rainbow-colored foam<br />
a packet of sugar   a pat of butter<br />
a split roll of bread<br />
scored and toasted and still warm<br />
The butter is just soft enough to spread<br />
the coffee hot and sugared to perfect sweetness<br />
the bread grilled to the palest brown<br />
crisp but not quite dry<br />
You tear it neatly into pieces<br />
eat them slowly    when you finish<br />
you are exactly full</p>
<p>Here are bread butter and coffee<br />
Here you are     your own body<br />
eating and drinking what you are given<br />
as one day you in turn will be devoured<br />
and that is all     You were never the lord<br />
of a lightless kingdom     any more<br />
than she has ever been its queen<br />
and the world you talked into a prison<br />
suddenly seems to be made of glass<br />
and your eyes see clear to the horizon<br />
and you feel the molecules of air<br />
part like a curtain     as if to let you pass<br />
—From “Couple From Hell”</p></blockquote>
<p>This is from <em>Made Flesh</em>, which is a different sort of book from <em>Shells</em>. <em>Shells</em> is often about the immediacy of experience, but there is just as often a detachment to the poems, a very palpable (and altogether successful) sense of artifice, of talent that is in some way distancing a world even as it brings that world wildly alive. In <em>Made Flesh</em> that distance is gone. The language is sparer, all irony is obliterated, the poems are less obviously “formal,” and their raptures are at once quieter and more complete. There is something both precise and encompassing about these poems, something at the same time piercing and liberating. Time abrades talent. Some poets don’t seem to notice this and continue to make the same ever-thinning sound right on into oblivion. Others lapse into embittered silence. In some, though, the abrasions bloom:</p>
<blockquote><p>On the fire escape of your rented room<br />
we sat and felt the empty city<br />
sweat and fret     we passed a cigarette<br />
back and forth     as once we passed<br />
words like these between us      without<br />
hope of keeping<br />
Now I write<br />
without hope of answer     to say<br />
that what we gave each other nakedly<br />
was too much and not enough<br />
To say that since we last touched<br />
I am not empty     I hear you named<br />
and my heart starts     the pieces of your voice<br />
you left     are interleaved with mine</p>
<p>and to this quick spark in the emptiness<br />
to say Yes     I miss how love<br />
may make us otherwise<br />
—From “Asunder”</p></blockquote>
<p>The bracing, rule-breaking (show, then tell), completely convincing move from detail to abstraction, from sensation to realization; the space-ghosted form of the lines so apt for their subject; the careful, graceful assurance of the poem as it charts an entirely new route through a minefield of emotional and poetic clichés: it takes an enormous amount of skill to speak one’s pain in this way, and it takes a rare, clear heart.</p>
<p>I last saw Craig back in February, when he came into town for the AWP conference. He showed up at the <em>Poetry</em> offices one afternoon and practically lifted me off the floor in a hug. As always, the twitchy intelligence, the solar flares of his energy, surprised me—and, as always, surprised a happiness in me I hadn’t known was there. We locked him in an office all afternoon in hopes that he would write the long-overdue prose note to the translation he had done for our April issue, and for hours he sat there (weird: how suddenly still he could become, how creaturely focused), finally emerging near dusk with a single brilliant and self-revealing page on a poet he had recently met while living in Colombia (“to hit upon such an image requires an intimate acquaintance with all the flavors of pain and persistence and hopelessness—here, I thought, was a conscience to reckon with”). The next day he led—with great kindness, and much to my surprise—a reading he’d shaped as a celebration of the magazine. He’d given up the extravagant reading style of years before because, he said, he began to think it was actually deflecting people’s attention and detracting from the work. Still, even understated (as if that word could ever be used for Craig!), he was searing, mesmerizing, unforgettable.</p>
<p>Craig stayed with my wife and me that week, and somehow in between the dozens of friends he was seeing, or tending to, or shuttling to and from the airport, we found time to talk. I remember most clearly his last morning here, when he made us <em>migas</em> for breakfast, and the conversation turned to something he and I had talked of many times over the years: the necessary but destabilizing intensities of poetry, and the life that one risks by cultivating those intensities, and the life that—in some cases, our cases, we both felt—poetry also rescues. Out in the front yard he gave me another of his no-holds-barred hugs and promised to be back in August. Only as he drove off did I realize I’d forgotten to get him to sign our copy of <em> Made Flesh,</em> which is a shame, since the inscription he wrote for me on <em>Shells</em> all those years ago is a gem. Filling the entire page, and linking quotations from <em>Fight Club</em> and Baudelaire with a self-consciously absurd smiley face, it’s Craig all over. “I hope this stays with you,” he scrawled on the very last bit of space at the end of the page. “I certainly will.”</p>
<p>Christian Wiman is the author of three books, most recently <em>Ambition and Survival: Becoming a Poet</em>. A new book of poetry, <em>Every Riven Thing</em>, is forthcoming in 2011. He has edited <em>Poetry</em> magazine since 2003. <em>This essay originally appeared in the October 2009 issue of</em><em> Poetry </em>magazine. Distributed by the Poetry Foundation at <a href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend.com/t/r/l/hhutz/xztjldt/j" target="_blank"> www.poetryfoundation.org</a>.</p>
<p>© 2009 by Christian Wiman. All rights reserved.</p>
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I was one of the last people to arrive for Wayne Miller’s morning presentation at last month’s South Dakota Festival of Books in Deadwood. He hadn’t started reading yet, and looking back, I’m glad I didn’t miss a minute of his presentation. His poems live well on the page, but as is so often the [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=ericedits.wordpress.com&blog=1839372&post=540&subd=ericedits&ref=&feed=1" />]]></description>
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<p>I was one of the last people to arrive for Wayne Miller’s morning presentation at last month’s South Dakota Festival of Books in Deadwood. He hadn’t started reading yet, and looking back, I’m glad I didn’t miss a minute of his presentation. His poems live well on the page, but as is so often the case, hearing the poet read his own work adds a dimension of emotion that otherwise does not resonate.</p>
<p>After his reading in Deadwood, Miller asked me if I knew where he could get a good breakfast in Deadwood. But being not so familiar with the town, I couldn’t give him any advice. Later, I overheard him telling another one of the festival poets how dreadful his hotel breakfast was. Sorry, Wayne. Deadwood’s just not a real breakfasty sort of place.</p>
<p>Had I read Miller’s “The Book of Props,” though, I would have tried much harder to make sure he got a decent meal. Anyway, Miller’s bio:</p>
<p>Wayne Miller is the author of two collections of poems, <a href="http://www.milkweed.org/component/page,shop.product_details/flypage,shop.flypage/product_id,877/category_id,52/option,com_phpshop/Itemid,8/" target="_blank"><em>The Book of Props</em></a> (<a href="http://milkweed.org/" target="_blank">Milkweed</a>, 2009) and <a href="http://www.wmich.edu/%7Enewissue/New_Issues_Titles/Miller/Miller_Book_Page.html" target="_blank"><em>Only the Senses Sleep</em></a> (<a href="http://www.wmich.edu/newissues/" target="_blank">New Issues</a>, 2006), which received the <a href="http://www.writersplace.org/default.aspx?PageID=57" target="_blank">William Rockhill Nelson Award</a>. He is also translator of <a href="http://boaeditions.org/authors/zeqo.htm" target="_blank">Moikom Zeqo</a>’s <a href="http://www.boaeditions.org/bookstore/details.php?prodId=94" target="_blank"><em>I Don’t Believe in Ghosts</em></a> (<a href="http://www.boaeditions.org/" target="_blank">BOA Editions</a>, 2007) and editor (with <a href="http://www.kevinprufer.com/" target="_blank">Kevin Prufer</a> and 22 regional editors) of <a href="http://www.graywolfpress.org/component/page,shop.flypage/product_id,253/category_id,0485aa93fa0558fb1f755721e776984d/option,com_phpshop/" target="_blank"><em>New European Poets</em></a> (<a href="http://www.graywolfpress.org/" target="_blank">Graywolf</a>, 2008). The recipient of the <a href="http://www.poetrysociety.org/psa-awards.php" target="_blank">George Bogin Award</a>, the <a href="http://www.poetrysociety.org/psa-awards.php" target="_blank">Lucille Medwick Award</a> (in 2004, 2005, 2007, and 2009), and the <a href="http://www.poetrysociety.org/psa-awards.php" target="_blank">Lyric Poetry Award</a> from the <a href="http://www.poetrysociety.org/" target="_blank">Poetry Society of America</a>, as well as a <a href="http://www.poetryfoundation.org/foundation/prizes_fellowship.html" target="_blank">Ruth Lilly Fellowship</a> and the <a href="http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/prizes.html#hokin" target="_blank">Bess Hokin Prize</a> from the <a href="http://www.poetryfoundation.org/" target="_blank">Poetry Foundation</a>, Miller lives in Kansas City and teaches as the <a href="http://www.ucmo.edu/" target="_blank">University of Central Missouri</a>, where he edits <a href="http://www.ucmo.edu/englphil/pleiades/" target="_blank"><em>Pleiades: A Journal of New Writing</em></a>.</p>
<p><strong>AFTER LONG BUSYNESS: </strong>Who do you consider to be the biggest influences on your poetry?</p>
<p><strong>WAYNE MILLER: </strong>Like most writers, I’m pretty much continually reading, and what I read affects what I write. Which is to say that, at different moments in my writing life, different poets have been important to me.</p>
<p>The first poet whose work I really fell in love with—back in what I believe was my sophomore year of college—was James Wright. I’d read poetry before; in fact, I’d had an excellent high school teacher in Cincinnati who’d brought contemporary poetry into the classroom, and I owned a copy of <em>Leaves of Grass</em>. My dad was an English professor, and I remember flipping around in his collected William Carlos Williams when I visited him.</p>
<p>But James Wright opened up doors for me. He was writing about Ohio, where I was from, in ways that made the Midwestern landscape feel charged with poetic possibility. And his work was deeply affected by contact with the works of non-American poets such as Lorca, Vallejo, Rilke and Trakl—something that, ironically, allowed him to write more directly and effectively about the American landscape.</p>
<p>Partially inspired by Wright, and aided by the fact that I attended Oberlin College, where all the poetry professors were also translators, I found myself very early on reading non-English language poets in translation—and it was then that I first discovered Rainer Maria Rilke, whose work (though I still can only read it in translation) has been perhaps the most enduringly important to me of any poet’s.</p>
<p>The other poet I go back to more than any other is Wallace Stevens, whose sense of music and rhythm is extraordinary and who, like Rilke, is interested in (among other things) the phenomenological complications of our experience of the physical world.</p>
<p>At this point, I feel compelled to list off the names of all the other poets I admire—whose work I go back to at least semi-regularly. But rather than miss folks and feel guilty later, perhaps I should end my answer there.</p>
<p><strong>ALB: </strong>How much revision do your poems usually go through?</p>
<p><strong>WM: </strong>I know some poets whose first drafts emerge pretty close to the poems’ finished versions, but I’m definitely not one of them. When my first book, <em>Only the Senses Sleep</em>, came out, a student of mine asked how much I’d had to revise the poems in it, so I went back through my drafts and looked at when the poems began, when I published them in magazines, and when they arrived at their final, in-the-book versions (which sometimes included significant revision after magazine publication). There wasn’t one poem in the book I’d worked on for less than six months—and many of them I’d worked on for several years.</p>
<p>Of course, that was also my first book. In the room of every new poem, I find myself stumbling around in the dark, but in those early poems the rooms were often pitch black. I’m a more experienced poet now, and though I still do quite a lot of revision, it’s somewhat more rare that my poems need the truly radical revisions that my earlier poems often did. These days I tend to spend several months off-and-on-again revising.</p>
<p><strong>ALB: </strong>Your most recent collection, “The Book of Props,” has a sequence of 23 poems called “What the Night Says to the Empty Boat (Notes for a Film in Verse),” which sketches out a screenplay for a film. How did you arrive at the idea of using a screenplay as a device to frame your poems?</p>
<p><strong>WM: </strong>“What Night Says to the Empty Boat” began with a couple drafty lyric poems that were failing because they were too sentimental and/or could too easily be read as autobiographical. In each of them, I found myself wanting to distance the speaker from the emotional content, so I switched from first to third person. But then I found that a random “he” in a poem didn’t seem particularly distanced—a reader could quite easily still read that “he” as me. So I switched one of the poems to “she.”</p>
<p>At that point, I thought, hmm, what if those “he’s” and that “she” know each other; in other words, what if they’re characters.</p>
<p>Then I decided that if pronouns without antecedents are annoying in prose, they’re probably at least as annoying in poetry (T.S Eliot notwithstanding), so I gave them names—based loosely on three particular people I knew.</p>
<p>I’d also, at the time, been trying (miserably) to write some fiction, and I think the resulting interest in narrative and character propelled my desire to allow a background storyline to accrue across these poems. I liked the visual, image-based nature of film, but I didn’t want to have a full “film in verse,” because that would require me to construct a complete narrative, and I was much more interested in the poems being lyrics. So “notes for a film” seemed to make sense—it further distanced those early failing poems and, in the process, added a fourth character—the filmmaker talking to himself about the film he envisions making.</p>
<p>At this point I think I had four or five poems. Then summer hit and I moved back to Houston to live with my girlfriend, who’d been there finishing up school while I’d been in Missouri in my first year of teaching.</p>
<p>That summer, when she left for work each day I found myself alone in her cramped apartment, with my laptop, little money and nothing to do—in a kind of limbo between my life in Missouri and my former life in Houston. Writing into a developing sequence seemed a perfectly good way to spend my time—which meant I gave myself more leeway to “play around” than I otherwise might have. And the experience of being reunited with my girlfriend after a year apart colored the overall themes and content of the sequence. In my mind, it’s all really one big love poem.</p>
<p><strong>ALB: </strong>I assume that, as an editor of <em>Pleiades: A Journal of New Writing</em>, you spend a good amount of time reading poetry by a wide range of poets. How is the state of the art these days?</p>
<p><strong>WM: </strong>Every six months, it seems, someone or other is decrying some aspect of the state of contemporary poetry—whether it’s John Barr, Ron Silliman, or someone in between. From my Stylite’s perch atop the <em>Pleiades</em> slush pile, however, the state of poetry looks pretty good; the best work showing up in our mailbox is consistently varied and strong.</p>
<p>There was a time in the mid-1980s when what seemed to matter most about much of the poetry that was being published was that it was TRUE—that an uncle really had been mean to the poet, or that the poet’s grandmother really had been dying, or that the poet really did feel bad about failing as a parent, or that the poet really had fought off cancer. Form seemed less important than content, in other words, and content seemed primarily <em>ad misericordium</em>.</p>
<p>In the mid-1990s, a lot of interesting poets started resisting that baldly autobiographical impulse, and many of the poetic strains getting press these days are various versions of that pushback against post-confessionalism. For example, we have Steven Burt’s injection of confessionalism with aspects of Language poetics (“elliptical” poetry), a return to the Objectivists (what Burt calls the “new thing”) and other Modernists, a renewed interest in the New York School poets, neoformalism, a focus on personas and dramatic monologues (e.g., Maurice Manning and my colleague Kevin Prufer), a turn toward European surrealism and/or classicism, etc.</p>
<p>In my mind, all these diverse approaches to keeping form and content, technique and raw emotion, in balance are good for the art. And <em>Pleiades</em> has pretty consistently received—and enjoyed receiving—the work of many good poets mining these various aesthetic veins.</p>
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		<title>American Life in Poetry: Column 241</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[BY TED KOOSER, U.S. POET LAUREATE, 2004-2006
I love poems in which the central metaphors are fresh and original, and here’s a marvelous, coiny description of autumn by Elizabeth Klise von Zerneck, who lives in Illinois.
Like Coins, November
We drove past late fall fields as flat and cold
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>BY TED KOOSER, U.S. POET LAUREATE, 2004-2006</p>
<p>I love poems in which the central metaphors are fresh and original, and here’s a marvelous, coiny description of autumn by Elizabeth Klise von Zerneck, who lives in Illinois.</p>
<p><strong>Like Coins, November</strong></p>
<p>We drove past late fall fields as flat and cold<br />
as sheets of tin and, in the distance, trees</p>
<p>were tossed like coins against the sky. Stunned gold<br />
and bronze, oaks, maples stood in twos and threes:</p>
<p>some copper bright, a few dull brown and, now<br />
and then, the shock of one so steeled with frost</p>
<p>it glittered like a dime. The autumn boughs<br />
and blackened branches wore a somber gloss</p>
<p>that whispered tails to me, not heads. I read<br />
memorial columns in their trunks; their leaves</p>
<p>spelled UNUM, cent; and yours, the only head . . .<br />
in penny profile, Lincoln-like (one sleeve,</p>
<p>one eye) but even it was turning tails<br />
as russet leaves lay spent across the trails.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>American Life in Poetry is made possible by The Poetry Foundation (<a title="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend3.com/t/r/l/hihhud/sljhydku/y" href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend3.com/t/r/l/hihhud/sljhydku/y">www.poetryfoundation.org</a>), publisher of <em>Poetry</em> magazine. It is also supported by the Department of English at the University of Nebraska, Lincoln. Poem copyright ©2008 by Elizabeth Klise von Zerneck. Reprinted from <em>The Spoon River Poetry Review,</em> Vol. XXXIII, no. 1, 2008, by permission of Elizabeth Klise von Zerneck and the publisher. The introduction’s author, Ted Kooser, served as United States Poet Laureate Consultant in Poetry to the Library of Congress from 2004-2006. We do not accept unsolicited manuscripts.</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[Brenda  Starr makes way for Rumi, Neruda, and Merwin.
By Mary  Schmich
Poetry Media Service
I write a news  column at the Chicago Tribune, and at the beginning of baseball season  this year one of my editors phoned with a tough assignment, something, he said,  that called for special skills.
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p><strong>Brenda  Starr makes way for Rumi, Neruda, and Merwin.</strong></p>
<p>By Mary  Schmich<br />
Poetry Media Service</p>
<p>I write a news  column at the <em>Chicago Tribune,</em> and at the beginning of baseball season  this year one of my editors phoned with a tough assignment, something, he said,  that called for special skills.</p>
<p>Was I being  asked to investigate a doping scandal? conduct an exclusive interview? throw out  the first pitch?</p>
<p>“Can you write  us a poem about opening day?” he asked.</p>
<p>He and I both  knew that by “poem” he meant doggerel—silly verse written with a wink—and I  obliged:</p>
<blockquote><p>Yes,  baseball&#8217;s back, at last, at last<br />
To bat away the blues<br />
The games arrive  like sunshine<br />
In the bleepin&#8217; gloomy news.</p>
<p>Blagojevich  indicted!<br />
The economy&#8217;s a mess!<br />
Plus parking, potholes, crooks and  crimes!<br />
We need some anti-stress!<br />
—From <em>An Ode to Opening  Day</em></p></blockquote>
<p>It ran on the  front page, embroidered with old-fashioned bunting that signaled that rhyming  verse, like baseball itself, was a relic of a quainter time.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve always  felt slightly sheepish about the pleasure I get from my occasional forays into  doggerel. The enjoyment some columnists get from their political fulminations, I  get from rhyming “spinach” and “Kucinich.”</p>
<p>I feel only  slightly less sheepish about how often I exploit the poems of real poets to make  a serious point. Poetry and journalism are like peanut butter and baloney:  coupling them is not to everyone&#8217;s taste.</p>
<p>But I can&#8217;t  help myself. Poetry isn&#8217;t just a way of writing, it&#8217;s a way of thinking, and  I&#8217;ve been thinking that way since at least sixth grade.</p>
<p>At Alexander  School IV in Macon, Georgia, Miss Lois Birch, who seemed as old as God, made us  memorize poems. The two I remember spring to mind as often as the faces of old  friends. I keep them in my head the way you might keep worry beads in your  pocket, reaching reflexively in times of stress for their meaning, rhythm,  sound.</p>
<p>One is by John  Masefield: “I must go down to the seas again, to the lonely sea and the sky, /  And all I ask is a tall ship and a star to steer her by.” The other is by <a title="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend4.com/t/r/l/hdira/xztjldt/r" href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend4.com/t/r/l/hdira/xztjldt/r">William  Wordsworth</a>:</p>
<blockquote><p>I wandered  lonely as a cloud<br />
That floats on high o&#8217;er vales and hills,<br />
When all at  once I saw a crowd,<br />
A host, of golden daffodils.</p></blockquote>
<p>Whenever I  can, I sneak poems into my newspaper column.</p>
<p>After  terrorists flew airplanes into the World Trade Center, I instinctively flipped  through my most dog-eared book of poems, <a title="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend4.com/t/r/l/hdira/xztjldt/y" href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend4.com/t/r/l/hdira/xztjldt/y">Wislawa  Szymborska</a>&#8217;s <em>View with a Grain of Sand,</em> and plucked a few verses  from “Hatred”:</p>
<blockquote><p>See how  efficient it still is,<br />
how it keeps itself in shape—<br />
our century&#8217;s  hatred.<br />
How easily it vaults the tallest obstacles.<br />
How rapidly it  pounces, tracks us down.</p></blockquote>
<p>Her poem gave  my prose a power it wouldn&#8217;t otherwise have had.</p>
<p>When <a title="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend4.com/t/r/l/hdira/xztjldt/j" href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend4.com/t/r/l/hdira/xztjldt/j">W.S.  Merwin</a> won the 2009 Pulitzer Prize for poetry, I used the occasion as an  excuse to quote from “Rain Light,” about a mother&#8217;s death. I put a link to the  entire poem in my column, and hundreds of readers sought it out.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve bolstered  my own summer musings with <a title="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend4.com/t/r/l/hdira/xztjldt/t" href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend4.com/t/r/l/hdira/xztjldt/t">Mary  Oliver</a>&#8217;s “The Summer Day,” whose last line electrocutes me every time I read  it: “Tell me, what is it you plan to do / with your one wild and precious  life?”</p>
<p>In autumn,  I&#8217;ve quoted from <a title="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend4.com/t/r/l/hdira/xztjldt/i" href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend4.com/t/r/l/hdira/xztjldt/i">Pablo  Neruda</a>&#8217;s “October Fullness,” though it&#8217;s about October as a time of life  more than a time of year:</p>
<blockquote><p>Little by  little, and also in great leaps,<br />
life happened to me,<br />
and how  insignificant this business is.</p></blockquote>
<p>The response  to the columns in which I quote good poems is always strong, which is another  reason to feel sheepish: even with full attribution, I&#8217;m reaping credit for  someone else&#8217;s genius.</p>
<p>Poetry also  creeps into <em>Brenda Starr,</em> the soap-opera comic strip I&#8217;ve written for  24 years. Our heroine, Brenda, quotes poetry and muses on it. Heroes and  villains alike use it to woo her.</p>
<p>Recently, a  mysterious, dashing man named Ringo, from the fictitious country of Kazookistan,  dazzled her with verse:</p>
<p><img src="http://www.poetryfoundation.org/images/features/BrendaStarr-comicsm.jpg" border="0" alt="" /></p>
<p>Ringo didn&#8217;t  conquer Brenda, but he did seduce many comics readers who were grateful to  discover Rumi and Hafiz.</p>
<p>Newspaper  columns, comic strips, and poems may not seem like related literary forms, but  they&#8217;re less different than they look. In their own ways, each of them seeks the  same thing: to make meaning in a space whose power lies in always being just a  little too short.</p>
<p>Mary Schmich  is a columnist for the <em>Chicago Tribune</em> and writes the Brenda Starr  comic strip. This essay first appeared in the September 2009 issue of  <em>Poetry</em> magazine and is available at <a title="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend4.com/t/r/l/hdira/xztjldt/d" href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend4.com/t/r/l/hdira/xztjldt/d">www.poetryfoundation.org</a>.  Distributed by the Poetry Foundation.</p>
<p>© 2009 by Mary  Schmich. All rights reserved.</p>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 31 Oct 2009 14:48:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[BY TED KOOSER, U.S. POET LAUREATE, 2004-2006
We haven’t shown you many poems in which the poet enters another person and speaks through him or her, but it is, of course, an effective and respected way of writing. Here Philip Memmer of Deansboro,  N.Y., enters the persona of a young woman having an unpleasant experience [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=ericedits.wordpress.com&blog=1839372&post=534&subd=ericedits&ref=&feed=1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>BY TED KOOSER, U.S. POET LAUREATE, 2004-2006</p>
<p>We haven’t shown you many poems in which the poet enters another person and speaks through him or her, but it is, of course, an effective and respected way of writing. Here Philip Memmer of Deansboro,  N.Y., enters the persona of a young woman having an unpleasant experience with a blind date.</p>
<p><strong><br />
<strong>The Paleontologist’s Blind Date</strong></strong></p>
<p><em>You have such lovely bones,</em> he says,<br />
holding my face in his hands,</p>
<p>and although I can almost feel<br />
the stone and the sand</p>
<p>sifting away, his fingers<br />
like the softest of brushes,</p>
<p>I realize after this touch<br />
he would know me</p>
<p>years from now, even<br />
in the dark, even</p>
<p>without my skin.<br />
<em>Thank you,</em> I smile—</p>
<p>then I close the door<br />
and never call him again.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>American Life in Poetry is made possible by The Poetry Foundation (<a title="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend4.com/t/r/l/httltt/sljhydku/y" href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend4.com/t/r/l/httltt/sljhydku/y">www.poetryfoundation.org</a>), publisher of <em>Poetry</em> magazine. It is also supported by the Department of English at the University of Nebraska, Lincoln. Poem copyright ©2008 by Philip Memmer, whose most recent book of poetry is <em>Lucifer: A Hagiography</em>, Lost Horse Press, 2009. Poem reprinted from <em>Threat of Pleasure,</em> Word Press, 2008, by permission of Philip Memmer and the publisher. The introduction’s author, Ted Kooser, served as United States Poet Laureate Consultant in Poetry to the Library of Congress from 2004-2006. We do not accept unsolicited manuscripts.</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[Robert  Creeley in the outfield.
By Fernando  Perez
Poetry Media Service
I write from  Caracas, the murder capital of the world, where I’ve been employed by the Leones  to score runs and prevent balls from falling in the outfield. At the ankles of  the Ávila Mountain amongst a patch of dusky high-rises, the [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=ericedits.wordpress.com&blog=1839372&post=532&subd=ericedits&ref=&feed=1" />]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p><strong>Robert  Creeley in the outfield.</strong></p>
<p>By Fernando  Perez<br />
Poetry Media Service</p>
<p>I write from  Caracas, the murder capital of the world, where I’ve been employed by the Leones  to score runs and prevent balls from falling in the outfield. At the ankles of  the Ávila Mountain amongst a patch of dusky high-rises, the downtown grounds of  el Estadio Universitario packed beyond capacity are ripe for a full-bodied poem.  A mere pitching change is an occasion <em>para rumbiar,</em> and the  pursed-lipped riot squad is always on the move with their spanking machetes  swinging from their hips. The game isn’t paced necessarily by innings or score.  It’s marked by the pulsating bass drums of the samba band that trails bright,  scantily clad, headdressed goddesses strutting about the mezzanine. The young  fireworks crew stands mere feet from flares that don’t always set out  vertically, sometimes landing in the outfield still aflame. “The wave” includes  heaving drinks into the sky.</p>
<p>In earning my  stripes as a professional baseball player, I’ve been through many cities and  have stared out of hotel windows all over the Americas. Ballplayers are  mercenaries, taking assignments indiscriminately. Throughout the minor leagues  you’ll find yourself slouched on a bus, watching small towns roll by  matter-of-factly like stock market tickers, on your back in a new nondescript  room, or “shopping for images” (<a title="blocked::http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend3.com/t/r/l/htultk/xztjldt/r" href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend3.com/t/r/l/htultk/xztjldt/r">Allen  Ginsberg</a>) in a Wal-Mart, hunched over a cart in no rush.</p>
<p>Like poetry,  baseball is a kind of counterculture. The (optional) isolation from the outside  world (which I often opt for); the idleness about which—and out of which—so many  poems are written or sung: I see this state of mind as a blessing. Sometimes, in  fact, when I haven’t turned on a television or touched a newspaper for months,  freed from the corporate bombast, poetry is the only dialect I recognize.</p>
<p>Long ago <a title="blocked::http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend3.com/t/r/l/htultk/xztjldt/y" href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend3.com/t/r/l/htultk/xztjldt/y">Robert  Creeley</a> confirmed my suspicion that words strung even sparingly together can  be as aurally powerful as anything else we have. He has been my most important  poet, because I can take him anywhere, like oranges—even reduced to nothing in  both physical and mental exhaustion, nauseous and half asleep busing from a  red-eye.</p>
<p>One of my  first managers always preached separation from the game for the sake of our own  health, and for the sake of our performance. The game can be maddening, and we  ought to corner ourselves in this trade only so far. I’m in love with baseball,  but eventually my prime will end, and she’ll slowly break my heart. Baseball has  remained remarkably impervious to modernity, but is, like any modern industry,  highly alienating. I turn to poetry because it is less susceptible to  circumstance. I’m not especially touched when a poet deals with a ball game; I’m  not especially interested in having one world endear itself to the other. Right  now I need them apart; right now I’m after displacement, contrast. The thick  wilderness of, say, late Ashbery can wrangle with the narrowness of  competition.</p>
<p>Fernando Perez  is an outfielder for the Tampa Bay Rays. He received a degree in American  studies and completed the creative writing program at Columbia University in New  York City, where he lives in the off-season. This essay originally appeared in  the September 2009 issue of <em>Poetry</em> magazine, and is available at <a title="blocked::http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend3.com/t/r/l/htultk/xztjldt/j" href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend3.com/t/r/l/htultk/xztjldt/j">www.poetryfoundation.org</a>.  Distributed by the Poetry Foundation.</p>
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		<title>American Life in Poetry: Column 239</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[BY TED KOOSER, U.S. POET LAUREATE, 2004-2006
It’s likely that if you found the original handwritten manuscript of T. S. Eliot’s groundbreaking poem, “The Waste Land,” you wouldn’t be able to trade it for a candy bar at the Quick Shop on your corner. Here’s a poem by David Lee Garrison of Ohio about how unsuccessfully [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=ericedits.wordpress.com&blog=1839372&post=530&subd=ericedits&ref=&feed=1" />]]></description>
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<p>It’s likely that if you found the original handwritten manuscript of T. S. Eliot’s groundbreaking poem, “The Waste Land,” you wouldn’t be able to trade it for a candy bar at the Quick Shop on your corner. Here’s a poem by David Lee Garrison of Ohio about how unsuccessfully classical music fits into a subway.</p>
<p><strong><br />
<strong>Bach in the DC Subway</strong></strong></p>
<p>As an experiment,<br />
<em>The Washington Post</em><br />
asked a concert violinist—<br />
wearing jeans, tennis shoes,<br />
and a baseball cap—<br />
to stand near a trash can<br />
at rush hour in the subway<br />
and play Bach<br />
on a Stradivarius.<br />
<em>Partita No. 2 in D Minor</em><br />
called out to commuters<br />
like an ocean to waves,<br />
sang to the station<br />
about why we should bother<br />
to live.</p>
<p>A thousand people<br />
streamed by. Seven of them<br />
paused for a minute or so<br />
and thirty-two dollars floated<br />
into the open violin case.<br />
A café hostess who drifted<br />
over to the open door<br />
each time she was free<br />
said later that Bach<br />
gave her peace,<br />
and all the children,<br />
all of them,<br />
waded into the music<br />
as if it were water,<br />
listening until they had to be<br />
rescued by parents<br />
who had somewhere else to go.</p>
<p>American Life in Poetry is made possible by The Poetry Foundation (<a title="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend2.com/t/r/l/hykyw/sljhydku/y" href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend2.com/t/r/l/hykyw/sljhydku/y">www.poetryfoundation.org</a>), publisher of <em>Poetry</em> magazine. It is also supported by the Department of English at the University of Nebraska, Lincoln. Poem copyright ©2008 by David Lee Garrison, whose most recent book of poems is <em>Sweeping the Cemetery: New and Selected Poems,</em> Browser Books Publishing, 2007. Poem reprinted from <em>Rattle,</em> Vol. 14, No. 2, Winter 2008, by permission of David Lee Garrison and the publisher. Introduction copyright © 2009 by The Poetry Foundation. The introduction’s author, Ted Kooser, served as United States Poet Laureate Consultant in Poetry to the Library of Congress from 2004-2006. We do not accept unsolicited manuscripts.</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[Does  Billy Collins&#8217;s latest poetry collection leave readers laughing or  frowning?
By William  Logan
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Ballistics by Billy Collins. Random House, $24.00
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;"><strong>Does  Billy Collins&#8217;s latest poetry collection leave readers laughing or  frowning?</strong></p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">By William  Logan<br />
Poetry Media Service</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;"><strong>Ballistics</strong> by Billy Collins. Random House, $24.00</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Billy Collins  is funny, everyone agrees. The birds agree, the bees agree, even the fish in the  sea agree: Billy Collins is funny. Yet why do I feel, half an hour after closing  a Billy Collins book, a sharp grinding in my stomach, as if I&#8217;ve eaten some  fruit cake past its sell-by date? His wry, self-mocking poems wouldn&#8217;t hurt a  fly—but they couldn&#8217;t kill a fly, either, even if they tried. Readers who have  whetted their appetites for drollery on previous books may open <em>Ballistics </em>and be puzzled. Our Norman Rockwell of sly winks, and elbowing good humor,  and straw-hatted, flannel-shirted American whimsy is no longer funny. Worse,  some of his new poems take place in Paris.</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Billy  Collins&#8217;s method has been to borrow a dry nugget of fact or some mildly absurd  observation and see how far he can go. Say you read that the people of Barcelona  once owned an albino gorilla, or remember that Robert Frost said, “I have envied  the four-moon planet,” or find yourself talking to a dog about the future of  America. Why, the poem would almost write itself! Collins&#8217;s gift was to make the  poem a little odder than you expected. The problem with his new book is that the  ideas are still there, but the poems have lost their sense of humor. Here&#8217;s what  happens to that gorilla:</p>
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<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">These locals  called him Snowflake,<br />
and here he has been mentioned again in print</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">in the hope of  keeping his pallid flame alive<br />
and helping him, despite his name, to  endure<br />
in this poem where he has found another cage.</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Oh,  Snowflake,<br />
I had no interest in the capital of Catalonia—<br />
its people, its  history, its complex architecture—</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">no, you were  the reason<br />
I kept my light on late into the night<br />
turning all those pages,  searching for you everywhere.</p>
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<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">There must be  a lot of comic things to say about albino gorillas, things that don&#8217;t require  sentimental guff with a twitch of self-pity.</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Say you recall  the day Lassie died, when, after you finished your farm chores and ate your  oatmeal, you drove to town and scanned the books in Olsen&#8217;s Emporium—and what  books they were! An anthology of the Cavalier poets, <em>The Pictorial History  of Eton College, The Zen Teaching of Huang Po</em>. Why, who knew? This is a  send-up of Frank O&#8217;Hara&#8217;s “The Day Lady Died”—the book titles mock his purchase  of New World Writing (as he said, “to see what the poets/ in Ghana are doing”).  But then what?</p>
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<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">I&#8217;m leaning on  the barn door back home<br />
while my own collie, who looks a lot like  her,<br />
lies curled outside in a sunny patch<br />
and all you can hear as the  morning warms up<br />
is the sound of the cows&#8217; heavy breathing.</p>
</blockquote>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">And that&#8217;s it.  This labored parody of O&#8217;Hara&#8217;s famous ending (“I am sweating a lot by now and  thinking of/ leaning on the john door in the 5 SPOT/ while she whispered a song  along the keyboard/ to Mal Waldron and everyone and I stopped breathing”) isn&#8217;t  side-splitting at all. The premise has become just another excuse for softheaded  mush—Collins doesn&#8217;t even get round to mentioning (SPOILER ALERT!) that Lassie  was played by any number of dogs, that she was male (because males have glossier  coats), and that, besides, Lassie is immortal and can&#8217;t ever die.</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Collins has  managed to be what he rarely was in the past—dull. The ending in many of these  new poems falls flat, the speaker gazing at the moon or listening to a bird in  hopes of revelation. If Billy Collins can&#8217;t joke about death, for example, well,  who can? When he pokes fun at writers&#8217; guides (“Never use the word suddenly just  to create tension”), or of teachers who ask, “What is the poet trying to say?”  he&#8217;s still our best poet at piercing the pretensions of the whole literary  shebang. Get him off the subject, however, and the poems are suffused with mild  gloom and misanthropy. <em> </em></p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">When comedians  stop being funny, they must invent themselves anew or retire for good. A number  of poems here mention divorce in a roundabout way, reason enough for a man to  take off his rose-colored glasses and book a flight to Paris. Indeed, the most  hilarious poem in the book is titled “Divorce,” and it&#8217;s also the shortest:</p>
<blockquote>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Once, two  spoons in bed,<br />
now tined forks</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">across a  granite table<br />
and the knives they have hired.</p>
</blockquote>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">If Collins can  become the bitter philosopher of such lines, there&#8217;s hope yet. Otherwise, Poetry  must do what Poetry does when a poet runs out of gas, or screws the pooch, or  jumps the shark—give him a Pulitzer and show him the door.</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">William  Logan&#8217;s most recent book of criticism is <em>Our Savage Art: Poetry and the  Civil Tongue</em>.  His new poetry collection, <em>Strange Flesh</em>, appeared  last fall. This review first appeared in <em>The New Criterion</em>. Read more  about Billy Collins, and his poetry, at <a style="font-weight:bold;color:#184d49;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;text-decoration:none;" title="blocked::http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend1.com/t/r/l/hjidlk/xztjldt/r" href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend1.com/t/r/l/hjidlk/xztjldt/r">www.poetryfoundation.org</a>.</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">© 2009 by  William Logan. All rights reserved.</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[BY TED KOOSER, U.S. POET LAUREATE, 2004-2006
Though some teacher may have made you think that all poetry is deadly serious, chock full of coded meanings and obscure symbols, poems, like other works of art, can be delightfully playful. Here Bruce Guernsey, who divides his time between Illinois and Maine, plays with a common yam.
Yam
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>BY TED KOOSER, U.S. POET LAUREATE, 2004-2006</p>
<p>Though some teacher may have made you think that all poetry is deadly serious, chock full of coded meanings and obscure symbols, poems, like other works of art, can be delightfully playful. Here Bruce Guernsey, who divides his time between Illinois and Maine, plays with a common yam.</p>
<p><strong>Yam</strong></p>
<p>The potato that ate all its carrots,<br />
can see in the dark like a mole,</p>
<p>its eyes the scars<br />
from centuries of shovels, tines.</p>
<p>May spelled backwards<br />
because it hates the light,</p>
<p>pawing its way, paddling along,<br />
there in the catacombs.</p>
<p>American Life in Poetry is made possible by The Poetry Foundation (www.poetryfoundation.org), publisher of <em>Poetry</em> magazine. It is also supported by the Department of English at the University of Nebraska-Lincoln. Poem copyright ©2008 by Bruce Guernsey. Reprinted from <em>New England Primer</em> by Bruce Guernsey, Cherry Grove Collections, 2008, by permission of Bruce Guernsey and the publisher. Introduction copyright © 2009 by The Poetry Foundation. The introduction&#8217;s author, Ted Kooser, served as United States Poet Laureate Consultant in Poetry to the Library of Congress from 2004-2006. We do not accept unsolicited manuscripts.</p>
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Lyn  Hejinian’s latest poetry collection sets two different moods.
By Joyelle  McSweeney
Poetry Media Service
Saga/Circus,  by Lyn Hejinian. Omnidawn, $15.95
In Lyn  Hejinian&#8217;s latest book, two long poems (but they hardly feel long) make short  work of narrative and dismantle genre with an alert and damaging wit. First  comes &#8220;Circus&#8221; or &#8220;Lola.&#8221; [...]<img alt="" border="0" src="http://stats.wordpress.com/b.gif?host=ericedits.wordpress.com&blog=1839372&post=524&subd=ericedits&ref=&feed=1" />]]></description>
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<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;"><strong>Lyn  Hejinian’s latest poetry collection sets two different moods.</strong></p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">By Joyelle  McSweeney<br />
Poetry Media Service</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;"><strong>Saga/Circus</strong>,  by Lyn Hejinian. Omnidawn, $15.95</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">In Lyn  Hejinian&#8217;s latest book, two long poems (but they hardly feel long) make short  work of narrative and dismantle genre with an alert and damaging wit. First  comes &#8220;Circus&#8221; or &#8220;Lola.&#8221; This prose piece, with its attention to rings,  battles, payers and players, moves characters through a tightening, finally  dismaying cycle of events. Next comes &#8220;Saga,&#8221; also titled &#8220;The Distance,&#8221; which  applies pressure to two figures of continuity: the first–person speaker and the  sea voyage. Together, these texts form a contrast of cyclicality and stasis and  test the limits of writing as vehicle and vessel of both violence and  knowledge.</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">&#8220;Lola&#8221; begins  as a pitch–perfect homage to the work of Gertrude Stein, advancing in short  prose sections from &#8220;Chapter One&#8221; to &#8220;Chapter Two,&#8221; titles she repeats until we  do not know where we are. Eventually, we arrive at &#8220;Chapter If It’s True,&#8221;  &#8220;Chapter Between Two and Three,&#8221; &#8220;Chapter Supplied,&#8221; &#8220;Chapter To View.&#8221; This  recalls Stein’s delighted, flattening disregard for textual hierarchy, which  produces the incandescent waywardness of such works as Four Saints in Three  Acts. By the second page of &#8220;Lola,&#8221; chapters seem literally to have come loose  from the structural framework of narrative: &#8220;chapters in a mood, mid–air, in  plumes.&#8221;</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Such  recklessness is potentially hazardous for the characters who people &#8220;Lola,&#8221;  characters inasmuch as they recur and have proper names.</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">The sisters Hertha!</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Drew!</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Nina!</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Abdul Tommy Ahmed!</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Trish O’Reilly!</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Kurt Krakauer!</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Ludmilla Kaipa!</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">And Sue!</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">It is not just  with that final &#8220;Sue,&#8221; but in the very peopledness of these lines, that we hear  Stein’s &#8220;Susie Asado&#8221; et al. The first sentence marshals its many nouns like a  marching band around the goal posts &#8220;are&#8221; and &#8220;are.&#8221; The declarative energy of  that nominative &#8220;players&#8221; is undone by the duplicity of the word itself,  referring as it does to those who act with agency, seriously; those who act in a  drama, falsely; those who play games, literally; and those who play games  figuratively, bending the rules like Hejinian and Stein.</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Thanks to its  writerliness (and its writer), many delightful, unabashed set pieces grace  &#8220;Lola,&#8221; including epigrams, metaphors, and extended images. These are often  serious and dubious at the same time, such as &#8220;one wants to visit a town before  buying a house there or burning it down,&#8221; or, of greyhounds and, by implication,  the Wal–Mart employees who allegedly own them, &#8220;they don&#8217;t run from tyrants but  for them.&#8221; In an unexpectedly comic turn, &#8220;Lyn Hejinian&#8221; enters the text and is  disparaged as a minor writer; a paper on her work is given a &#8220;C.&#8221;</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Where &#8220;Lola&#8221;  most pointedly departs from its Steinian model is the entrance of violence into  this merry, convivial text. At this point the cyclicality of the text appears  less marvelous and more like a trap for its characters, who are victim to  whatever fusillade or battle enters the sentences and who cannot escape violence  except by disappearance from the text. The prose turns tense, then gloomy: &#8220;The  chapters do but are never done;&#8221; &#8220;Grief takes time, they say—it takes it all.&#8221;  Hejinian&#8217;s sentences, and her characters, cannot help but be interested in  violence. It is 2009 already, and, as the truism goes, you may not be interested  in violence, but violence is interested in you.</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">If there is  one ultra–narrative (and ultraviolent) poetic genre, it is the saga, the  Northern European form given to armed struggle, sea voyage, and obsessive  genealogical accounting. As its title suggests, the mood of Hejinian&#8217;s saga,  &#8220;The Distance,&#8221; is not one of action but of meditative stasis. Unlike a  conventional saga, there is no historical or geographical GPS at work here; the  speaking voice is simply at sea, shipbound, in motion but adrift.</p>
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<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">. . . I won’t  pretend</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">To be an  historian, how could I, when I<br />
have no idea</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Of today&#8217;s  date. Though I know we<br />
embarked one morning early</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">In May, I have  no idea how long ago that<br />
was</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">And I don&#8217;t  care. I breathe, I twist my<br />
hair. I watch</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">The sea. At  times it resembles an eye</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">But it isn&#8217;t  watching me.</p>
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<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Lineageless,  battleless, the female speaker shrugs off the patriarchal requirements of saga  even while her free verse is gathered up in a rhythmic, graceful full rhyme  (&#8220;me,&#8221; &#8220;sea&#8221;), which stands in for ancient, songlike sound structures. As with  &#8220;Lola,&#8221; here genre itself is at once medium, material, and subject, the pliant,  immersive sea in which craft sails. In &#8220;The Distance,&#8221; genre’s mutability and  capacity is figured by the literal sea. The impossible relationship of writing  to knowledge spurs the quest, but it is a quest of betweenness, not of arrival  or departure. The same theme is restated elsewhere: &#8220;I want to understand / What  I have seen and understand / That nothing I have seen explains what I have seen.  Like that.&#8221; In this version, that gestural &#8220;Like that&#8221; underscores language’s  excess to its own project, the way it adds to and even doubles the world it  would describe, thereby constantly extending its own task.</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">&#8220;The Distance&#8221;  is so busy with ars poetica that it is implicitly a more optimistic work than  &#8220;Lola.&#8221; Like <em>My Life</em>, which the author is constantly reworking and  (happily) extending, the possibilities within Hejinian&#8217;s ouevre are  inexhaustible, her working and reworking of writing’s generic and  epistemological potentials and capabilities is unending.</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">Joyelle  McSweeney&#8217;s poetry collections include <em>The Commandrine and Other Poems </em>and<em> The Red Bird</em>, and her reviews appears widely. She is co-editor  of Action Books and a professor of English at the University of Notre Dame. This  article first appeared in the <em>Boston Review</em>. Learn more about Lyn  Hejinian, and her poetry, at <a style="font-weight:bold;color:#184d49;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;text-decoration:none;" title="blocked::http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend1.com/t/r/l/hrditk/xztjldt/r" href="http://thepoetryfoundation.createsend1.com/t/r/l/hrditk/xztjldt/r">www.poetryfoundation.org</a>.</p>
<p style="font-size:11px;font-family:Verdana,Arial,sans-serif;">© 2009 by  Joyelle McSweeney. All rights reserved.</p>
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